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for Private Lessons

by LaurieBaker

person Rhiannon
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story..theres lots of surprises and i love how its written. theres something about it, i dunno. you\'re gonna continue with it right? i hope so!!! if you dont ill die. end of story.
person Kim Yeoung
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. An amazing piece of work; I love an erotic story that has an actual plot. Keep it up; can\'t wait to see what happens next.
person Loopypants
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very erotic. I really like this story. I hope you update soon.
person Xquizit
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o.o very interesting! i love it! please update very very soon!
person Anon
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was hot. very creative too
person sassyspicegurrl
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOTHOTHOT!!!!!!!!!!!!! update soon!!!! VERY SOOON! i was really excited when i saw you started this story--i discovered your other fics and voraciously tore them apart, but i thought you were more of a \"dead\" author...:) i\'m glad you\'re still writing. i loved your fic...dang, what\'s it called...with count dimera taking all the women in salem...that was HOT!!!! more like that, please! i love the whole domination thing, that\'s probably why. i\'m rambling now. keep writing!
person ChrisDawg88
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent so far! Please keep this going!
person Agaib
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow youre pretty good, but MORE DETAIl. I always want more detail. but your characterization is great you can really feel her... scholership
person Crimson Velvet
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So far so good! I look forward to the next chapter!