rate_review Reviews

I\'m not too great at reviews, but this is one of the best written stories that I think I have ever read. And trust me I READ a lot of different stuff, on here and published books. I hope you really continue with it because I can\'t wait to read the rest ^_^.

i like it. i love it. i want some more of it.

wow very hot and sad at the sametime. please let me know when you update

Well I admit I wasn\'t expecting that. I hope this isn\'t the end of the relationship! I liked this story to much for it to end.

I can\'t wait to see what Mr. C reaction was. I am so excited about the next chapter. Please hurry!

i wasnt going to review, in fact you are my first review on Adulfanfiction.net and i confess to being a chronic lurker but i will do anything, even press the dreaded \'review\' button if it will make you write faster. there, enough usuless praise.
i like the way character development is occuring, but i think you need to make the sex scenes and Mr.C more human. this chapter was better on that respect showing the awkwardness between them at the end and her usual dislike of oral, but i think if you just increase that to him being more human.
the development of Mr.C is impeded by her putting him on a pedestal i know, but...hmm, im not quite sure what im asking beyond MORE characterisation. i \'m sure the characters will get more depth for 2 reasons:
1. you seem to be a very good writer.
2. its only chapter 5, more deveolpment will come.
well, thats it from me.
keep writing!
Judith

Cold Shower Time! Makes me wanna sign up for singing lessons! :-) Great writing style. You paint a picture when you write.

Wonderful. I really ike this story. Keep up the good work.

OMG! This fourth chapter was so hot it sizzled, and the thorough build-up made it so much better! I love to read a well-written, literate, intelligent erotic story and hope that you have many more chapters for us!

HOT DAMN....I am loving this story!

Sel