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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haha, cute and engaging. :)
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I *think* that I can hazard a guess at the super-secret identity of a one Mr. C. ;)
Overall, this is a really strong and sexy story. Nice smut, but a genuine and interesting plot lies within, and that makes all of the difference. A nice PWP is great from time to time, but a strong, sexually charged story that contains decent charactertization and introspective bits is both wonderful and refreshing.
I hope that you update soon.
Overall, this is a really strong and sexy story. Nice smut, but a genuine and interesting plot lies within, and that makes all of the difference. A nice PWP is great from time to time, but a strong, sexually charged story that contains decent charactertization and introspective bits is both wonderful and refreshing.
I hope that you update soon.
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't normally review fics, but I had to here.
This is the best thing I've read on this site thus far, really. Sexy, well written, with just the right amount of smut. The imperfections of the characters made it sound so real, I'm tired of reading about perfect toned abs and tiny waists. Though Mr. C was indeed sex personified, I have to say.
This is the best thing I've read on this site thus far, really. Sexy, well written, with just the right amount of smut. The imperfections of the characters made it sound so real, I'm tired of reading about perfect toned abs and tiny waists. Though Mr. C was indeed sex personified, I have to say.
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I lovelovelove this story. ::melts::
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great update
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is an awesome story! update!!
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yet another lovely chapter. i don\'t care if there isnt a whole lot of sex, you have CHARACTERS! nopt just sex mannikins. you have restored my faith in Erotica fiction. thankyou.
Judith
Judith
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As an actress myself (or, an aspiring one, not to give myself unearned airs) I\'m enjoying this fic immensely! Keep on writing!
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Geez a break up then a cold, what a bummer. I feel so sorry for her. I hope everything works out for her in the end! Write soon:)
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like your story. you take you time and write it well. there\'s not an abundance of smut, but you fill it in with comedy and angst. just a couple of things to clear up about this most recent chapter.
what\'s wrong with living in the bible belt? what\'s wrong with saving your virginity until marriage? and i AM a southern baptist. i just feel like you\'re starting to cross the line with people who choose to save themselves for the people they\'ll be spending the rest of their life with. just be cautious. a lot of people will get very offended. but do keep writing and updating. i love your writing and your stories.
what\'s wrong with living in the bible belt? what\'s wrong with saving your virginity until marriage? and i AM a southern baptist. i just feel like you\'re starting to cross the line with people who choose to save themselves for the people they\'ll be spending the rest of their life with. just be cautious. a lot of people will get very offended. but do keep writing and updating. i love your writing and your stories.