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for Private Lessons

by LaurieBaker

person maccam
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man i tell you men can be asses at times. Oh how i feel her pain. Her ex is an asshole as well, to think that if he breaks them up she'll go running to him HA what does he take her for a joke. Look i'm from NYC and all that your writing brings back so many memories. I can't wait to read chapter 13. Great job with this story. I love it.
person Skim
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't want to ruin the mystique of the story for other readers if they're reading this review-but would "That Movie"/"That Actor" and "Mr.C" be an imitation of real life (seeing how you are a PotO fan)? Great story, btw!
person Haywire_Hakaze
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
@ Week 10 pt. 2

Holy shit, that was so hot! X3 Now, I have the craving for watching the otiginal King Kong movie...

Dammit, I'd take time to give you the praise you deserve, but I'm going to be late for Theatre rehearsals... Gotta run.
person Vex
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Thoroughly. Keep going!
person Loopypants
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bravo! I didn't think that it could get any better then the before chapters, but you surprsed me again:) Please write more!
person Haywire_Hakaze
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know, not signed in... I hate not signing in, but I'm busy and lazy... Anyway. She needs to punch Billy, assess her issues, and talk to Mr. C about it. I mean, it's not good to worry, ya know? ^^ Ah, well. Great, as always. And POOF! I'm gone! ^^
person erin
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am a huge fan of the student/teacher fics, but this one is my absolute favorite. It isn't as cliche as they usually are, and I love reading about Maggie. Please keep writing!!
person Loopypants
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very cute! I hope they have a nice dinner together!
person Anon13
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am struck with envy. You have an amazing talent for writing, obviously being used here. I love this story---wonderufl job, the desscription, the characters........Personality really shines through. At any rate, keep going, and update again! (Meaning, don't abandon such a wonderful story..)
person Rei
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haha, cute and engaging. :)