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for Private Lessons

by LaurieBaker

person theta-b
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I-like-it-I-like-it-I-like-it-I-like-it- I ABSOLUTELY LOVE YOUR STORY!!!
Golly, where did Mr C go??? o.O UPDATE!!!!
person finn
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loving it. Update soon!
person Loopypants
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow...this got really depressing really fast...I hope she sees him agian before something bad happens. Great story.
person Crimson Velvet
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Alright, if it wasn't Billy...then who? Great chappie btw!
person dutchess67
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I so love this story. It is truly wonderful and I hope you update again soon.
person Loopypants
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope verything works out. There so cute together, and they just started to get kinky in bed;) lol! Please Please update soon!!!
person kittynip9
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WTF?! Does this mean the next chapter is our heroine delivering Billy's diembodied head to Mr. C on a silver platter?
person blondiexoxo
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that sucks .. hope u update soon
person michelle
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
:-( im sad now
person Provocateur
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, the plot thickens! I was desperatly hoping to see some sort of resolution or understanding reached at the end of this chapter, but you decided not to deliver. I guess that I will just have to wait anxiously for the next installement. Damn LOL!

This was a good chapter, short but loaded with suspence. You've made your characters flesh and blood people who garner the reader's interest and sympathy. I can feel Maggie's confusion and sadness, and I can also understand from where Mr. C's grief and bitterness stems.

But I must step forward and ask if you're daring to insult the succulent Mr. B ;)?

LOL