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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this poem. It\'s very powerful and full of feeling. Keep it up girl, you\'re awesome!
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have the emotion there but the breaks that you chose for the lines made the poem choppy. You actually had some \'natural\' breaks there and then forced them to not conform.
Over all I liked your emotion but I don\'t like the subject (stupid to read something you don\'t like, right?)
Over all I liked your emotion but I don\'t like the subject (stupid to read something you don\'t like, right?)