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October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Finally you're back! I must admit to being a tad miffed that you didn't update and just reposted the last ch. i really love this story and I hope you continue it.
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, kink! Loving it, and their talk about it. Great!!
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story! Please, continue! ^^ Characters are so real and, well, hot. :P And I trully trully would like to know more about Krueger and his boyfriend. I wish that they would meet again. *hint hint* Hih. I can\'t wait for the next update! Thank you! XD
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent new chappy...yet again, you guys keep me on my toes for predicting what might happen next. I so didn\'t see them responding so well to Devi and Doug\'s advances, but I\'m glad they did. They\'re a laid back couple, adventurous...way to add a nice, erotic twist into the plot. Keep it coming, loving this!
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh wow. an orgy? now i\'ve heard it all. do these guys do more than have sex? though i must say the scenes are very hot.
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh gosh they are so sweet together. i really feel for iki
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh but they can whine. where is the testosterone? i almost want to shoot them both and put them out of their misery.
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
kreuger was a nice chracter. i woul dwant to know more about him. he doesn\'t sound liuke the stereotypical porn store owner. I think he is little cute with his crush on rio. athe scene was well executed an dhad a great flow. I have to say that it was something new for me and i wouldn\'t have guessed it to be hot but it was on some level i guess i felt like Rio did. gret job on this ch with cutting out the water works
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
a great job on pulling out iki\'s self analysis with out the sob tears and a caring krueger is a great addition. I like the character development here with seeking iki as more than just a sex machine.
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh kay that marj is just freaky weird. she creeps me out. it\'s good to see the guys getting along and iki happy for once.