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Oh my god!!
This is the best story, EVER,
ever, ever, ever, EVER!!!!!
You peeps are a GREAT team of writers!!!!

Thanks,
R

i think i'm going to cry. doug is such a horrible bastard. i think castration is in order. please please please don't make me wait so long for the next chapter. iki and rio have to be together or the world just isn't quite right. and poor devin too. i hope you plan a really horrendous punishment for doug. and don't let me angst over this for too long.

powers that be. Chapter 12, and that was HEARTWRENCHING. GUTWRENCHING. Nothing fucks you up like being drugged without your knowledge, except finding out what happened in the meantime. It was all I could do to prevent myself from scrolling down to see how it ended.

I, for one, will be waiting impatiently for the next installation, chomping at the bit to see if everything works out okay.

On a slightly unrelated note, I love the analogies you two write into your stories. "Smiling like the coming of night" or something similar... those are really wonderful. So kudos.

You know, I just read the first chapter and now I'm kind of freaked out. It sounds exactly like an experience I had once with my boyfriend when I was really depressed and stupidly drunk, except we weren't in a bathtub (too bad). I think this is the first time I could actually relate to a fictional character so well...and it's kind of sad. This just proves that my life is too dramatic and I'm a really psychotic drunk. *sigh*

Awesome updates that really had me feeling like my heart had been ripped out and trampled on repeatedly. I like that the betrayal seemed to almost come out of nowhere, just like in real life. When looking back, you left all kinds of clues that I missed, and it does make a lot of sense for there to be massive complications when dealing with a fourway that involved two committed couples. I can even kinda sympathize with the vindictive behavior of Doug. Poor misguided bastard. I enjoyed the new chapters, you definitely made me feel like the rug was pulled out from under me. I hope Iki and Rio work this out okay, but either way, I'm looking forward to more!

A very captivating story with complex characters. One can very easily sympathize with Rio and Iki because they are so thoroughly portrayed. Therefore it´s always heartrending when something or someone threatens to tear them apart. I hope they´ll stay together no matter what Lexi and Doug have planned. Please update soon!

Arrrghhh!

Poor Iki! How dare those people spike his drink!

Update soon!

I hope Rio kicks Lexi's arse once he finds out what's been going on. And he WILL find out won't he. *Stalks towards lime green and tangerine*

I'm glad we understand each other *grins*.

darkangel1210

Rejection and jealousy truly brought out the worst in Lexi and Doug. Still I won´t give up hope that Rio and Iki see through their scheme and save their love despite everything that happenend. They overcame so much already.

Why did Iki have to be raped just because Doug was feeling jealous of Rio and Rio for his punishment got a screaming orgasm? It jsut doesn't feel fair. But I guess that's what's up with being a victim of fate. Iki will always be the abused one. I am just happy that Rio came to his senses eventually. And who knew that Doug was such a psychpath. I am sooo glad that you guys continued to write. Great job

Oooh, that was hot. I love the visuals of the four of them stealing glances at each other, and Rio's reactions were actually kinda sweet in a way ^_^ I'm a huge fangirl of those two, but I do like Doug and Devin, too. All together in one big sweaty heap *shivers*...mmmmm. Can't wait for more from you, glad to see you're still up and running!