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for The Team Whore

by ThunderHawk2

person pettrum
schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wish this story continued...
person Acal
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn it stopped there, that was good.
person Anon
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
when u gonna update
person nami-namoor
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please write more of this. I\'m enjoying it immensely! Its been a wonderful source of strong, very powerful orgasms for me and my girlfriend (who likes reading and practicing certain scenes!!) ;)
person ali
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
write more!! this is great! i think that she should do it all with dave! that would be hot!!! :)
person Anon
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very interesting update please
person Marigold
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story, just to point out, a lot is spelled \"a lot\", not \"alot\".

^^;

I\'m starting to sound like my teacher... -.- Ah well, very good, I read the second chapter but hey, I
person Marigold
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wanted to review the first chapter.

Great story, Ja ne!
person ChrisDawg88
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter. Please get us the next update sooner!
person Pink
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is, so far, possibly the best fic I\'ve read on this site. I hope you\'ll contnue to right many more chapters.