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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I guess I will be the first to review your story. I am happy to say that I did not see any horrific grammar errors or spelling errors. The first chapter was easy to read and it was certainly interesting. I will be back to see what you have up next.
Dee
Dee
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good start. Very intriguing. I look forward to the next chapter.