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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story shouldn't even be here, it's at the worst PG-13.
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
constructive criticism>>> This was boring the moment i read it. The only way to improve this is make it longer with more background. Even though this was a one shot still make it the best one shot story ever!