rate_review Reviews

Hi! I don\'t get out of the Fantasy section as often as I should, but I\'m really glad that I checked this out. Your writing style is crisp, clean, and a pleasure to read. As for Josh, his despair about his own worthiness makes him a very believable character (I certainly felt that way about myself when I was a teenager), while his wry sense of humor keeps the story from turning into a self-pity fest (and is often outright hilarious). Actually, almost all the characters remind me of people I knew whan I was that age. I guess some things are universal, wether you went to highschool in an affluent California town, or a small town in the Midwest (that would be me). Oh yeah, and did I mention the story was very, very sexy? I love the sense of longing, slowly simmering beneath the surface, before eventually being brough to a boil...

And thanks for your lovely review of \"Sugar Hearts\" and \"Candy Kisses\"! It always makes me so happy to hear that someone enjoyed my work.

I hope this feedback inspires you to write more. I\'m adding the story to my favorites, so I can keep tabs on it, and catch any updates as soon as they appear!

Love,
Falcon

Awe! I loved the ending on that one. *L* Josh feeling out his maleness in the midst of a party. Now that he has newfound confidence, however, I wonder where that will take him?

Again, a gorgeous post. I love your use of vocabulary. Not just the \"big words\" but the specificity of it all. It makes for a delightful read.

I\'d say more, only I have to get ready for work! Best of luck and I look forward to the next chapter!!! :)

Oh wow.. what a sweetly done fic so far! I\'d say more but I\'m afraid I\'m running out of time and should have been in bed a long time ago. *L* But I\'ve been seeing this one for a while now and keep meaning to read.

I love your writing voice! You\'ve a wonderful grasp of vocabulary and the story is just marvelous - complete with Josh\'s own characterization which comes through so strongly. Gosh, had my heart skipping a beat there at the kiss! And true to the title - *L* I guess I ought not to have been so surprised, though I was. I guess, with all the girls demanding that Nick was gay, that I sort of expected it.

But I\'m glad that it\'s not as I expected.

Looking forward to more! :)

Damn, this is a great fic! More please!

I like it. please say your going to continue.

Hey great start, this sounds like it\'s going to be a really good story! Keep it up!!