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for Heroes And Ghosts

by flintywoman

person Lin
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God!! What a cliffhanger!!! *goes lunatic* ^^ Poor Rye, His life trully hasn\'t been nice. Please, update soon! XD
person Mystic
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Rye. The guy\'s had such a horrible life. So that\'s what he was dreaming about this entire time...not Ichi, but Mica. Although learning his new identity may still bring hauting memories, at least he knows that he\'s not out to kill his love! Good chapter. I think I\'m ready for some good, slow Ichi/Rye bonding! Yay!
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent few new chapters! I really like how Rye\'s developing, and you brought his urge to know his past very well across in the last chapter. Great bluff with the weapon, he almost pulled it off! I\'m really curious what Jake\'s crew will find in those files...
And heartfelt congratulations on your book! Being a published author is every hobby writer\'s secret dream, I\'m sure, and my hat is off to you for your courage to publish in a genre that many people find offensive. Your work is wonderful, you are very skilled and I sincerely wish you many, many sales. You deserve it.
Thank you also for your nice, insightful e-mail.

Eagerly awaiting the next chapters!
Greetings from Dany
person kaoschan
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* well that was one way to get them to help ^^
person ayachan
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woah.. that was.. intense... AND I LOVED IT!!! lol, please keep up w/ the good work ^_^
person Fury
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations on getting them in print! Woo! That\'s a huge accomplishment. Will the stories still be free to read? Or are you going to charge money for them or require us to have bought a copy. (Me = dirt poor right now) I\'ll buy one anyway though! Heh. -Fury
person mysticneko
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Though I don\'t agree with you taking down the chapters, I understand. You\'ve worked hard on them, and having people buy the books would be nice.
I wish you luck, and hope a ton of people buy your stuff! I wish I could... ):

How many chapters do you think there will be in this story? It doesn\'t seem even close to being finished... oh well, I enjoy reading every word! Keep up the good work! My favorite part was when that guy said \"That blushing thing is killer hot\" XD So funny!
person Jace
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I read the first twenty-seven chapters yesterday. (I have no life.) Today I read twenty-eight. Your story is sooooo good. *huggles it* I love it. You are quite amazing. *bows* I hope you write more soon and I\'d love to see this in print. By the way, where might I find a copy of the story you already have published?
person Anne Grey
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey there,

I\'m so pleased for you that you\'ve gotten your book into print form - all of your stories are simply wonderful, and and most are better by far than those that are commercially available. I\'ll definitely be ordering a copy, but I was wondering if there was a way to get the file version as well? My eyesight isn\'t the best, and I do nearly all of my reading on computer because of it. I\'d only want the file after you\'d confirmed my order, both because I very much believe you get to be compensated for your work and because I love the idea of *having* the book even if it\'s hard to read. (And hey, not a bad thing to have a hard copy that I can show to friends and say, \"There. Read *that* and then tell me slash can\'t be well-written.\")

Let me know if you can. (And love the cover art, by the way. Mmm.)

Best,

Anne
person Lin
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved the new chapter (like every one before it)! It was nice to read about Ryo and Ichi in a \"normal\" relationship situation... if anybody understands what I mean? Ah, anyway about that that people are mad at you because you removed \"Blurring the Lines\". I think that you did just a right thing. You\'re A writer so it is up to you to decide what you do with your work. So if people aren\'t ready to pay for it... then they just don\'t read it. So don\'t mind your head about it. Oki? ^^ *your supportive fan, always* Hihiii... (Yeah, I am obsessed with your stories)