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Wow. Really, that's about all I can say about this story right now, and I haven't even finished it! Mental note for myself, I'm on Part 11, chapter 12, haha.

Seriously, though, when I originally read the summary I was incredibly leery about the story, and after reading the first two or three chapters I became even more weirded out, haha. I mean, I knew this would develop into SOMETHING that involved sex, considering where it's posted and all, and reading about the 'pet' first had my bestiality warning light going off. Soo not into that.

But the writing kept me intrigued, along with the developing storyline. Plus, I began to develop a soft spot for Ichi; he's simply adorable. So I read on, and I have yet to be disappointed. This is turning into an adrenaline rush of a fic! I was actually getting giddy each time I clicked to a new chapter. You've kept me glued to my computer chair (not an easy feat, mind you), for over three hours reading this gem. Unbelievable. I am so glad I decided to click on this link, haha. I would have been seriously missing out.

You have no idea how badly I want to spend the rest of the day curled up with a glass of something, reading the rest of this. It takes a lot to capture my attention, but this has solidly done so. The flow is easy, the characters all distinct and wonderful, and the chemistry between Ichi and Rye is crackling. Simply perfect. I should so be reading this in book form instead of on a screen, so lemme know if you ever decide to get this baby published. -hintwinknudge-

In conclusion, I ramble. No, seriously. I'll definitely be coming back to finish this as soon as humanly possible, and if its not done you'll most certainly get another review from me-- one full of whining and clamoring for more. Those are always the best. ;)

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OH! Oh my... Wow.. Okay... Poor guy, poor Rye.... Killed his first boyfriend, no wonder he\'s so friggen\' scared of hurting Ichi.

Gorgeous chapter!!! And poor, poor Rye... you\'re really given him a tragic history - it will be interesting to see how regaining his memories affects him now.

I don\'t get it, how can this story seems so cute and sweet one chapter, and so cold the next? You\'re great writer. This story seems so real. But Mica is going to be an issue between Rye and Ichi isn\'t he? He\'s the real reason that Rye was first attracted to Ichi right? It almost seems like he was just replacing Mica with Ichi. I\'m not sure where you\'re going with this latest development so good luck.

This update was so powerful, I could hardly find words to comment on it. This chapter shows just have evil and sadistic Lerman really is. I hope in some upcoming chapter that Rye gets to face Lerman, and take out all the pain and suffering he has caused him. I hope Lerman has a painful death or some close to it. Remarkable update.
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Whoa, that was one intense chapter! Sad and disturbing as Rye's past is, I love the background you gave him. And to have his first love look so much like Ichi was a great idea; it explains Rye's instant attraction to Ichi and his nightmares wonderfully!
But, oh, I'm waiting for the chapter where Rye finally gets his hands on Conti! I'm hoping for a nice and thorough dismemberment or something equally gory, because Conti deserves nothing less.
Excellent job!
Dany

Yet another great chapter, so full of angst and pain though.

OH MY GOD! SOOOO SAD! But now we know why Rye was having that dream about Ichi! THAT MAN DESERVES TO DIE! ;-;!

This is one of the best stories I\'ve read on this or any other site.

You have such a unique talent.

I feel honored that you have shared your gift with the rest of us.

Thank you