rate_review Reviews

Wow, beautiful! I really really love this story! ^.^V You could even make a running series out of it. *LOL* Like the humanizing and growth of each of the Lerman 'agents' And I'm always eager to see more of Ichi and Rye. ^.^V

Man, that was an excellent conclusion to the question of 'how to get out'. I was worried there for a moment (wipes forehead). You did a great job on the tension in the hallway, and the dialogue between all the characters was really good and intense - the triplets kind of reminded me of Huey, Dewey and Louie with the way they finished each other's sentences :)
The offer they made Rye sounds like a very good idea; I can totally see Rye as the head of his own security firm. And (hopefully) with the other ex-operatives working for him...Avalon would be the safest place around.
Aw man, I think this story is getting ready to wrap up now...I'm gonna miss it!
Greetings from Dany

Great, another chapter. I can tell this story is drawing to a close. So Rye finally did his duty and did away with Conti. Hopefully his demons will pass now and he can get on with his life with Ichi by his side!

*Sigh* Sorry I didn't get to do this earlier, I kind of got smacked in the face with a few task that needed doing. *LOL* Anyway, That scene was awesome! He finally conqured his ghosts. So to speak *LOL* I can't wait to see how they get out too. ^.^V If this story ever hits the books I'm definately buying! I hope you continue to write slash! :D

What an excellent chapter!! From the skillful descriptions of Conti's office to the man himself. The dialogue between Conti and Rye was great, very emotional - and expertly done, all the way to his final words.
Again - great work; intense, graphic and cleansing. At least Rye achieved what he had come here to do. Now if they could just get out safely...
Awed greetings from Dany

Not as painful as I would have liked for Conti to die, but still effective. Great update...I guess Rye did have the balls after all. WHAT DO YOU GOTTA SAY NOW CONTI, HUH HUH, TAKES RIGHT YOU CAN'T SAY NOTHING!!!!!! Update soon, real soon.
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YES! *loud cheering* CONTI IS DEAD! GOOD! FINALLY! GOOD FOR THEM!

Now can they get out again and still be in relitivly one peice? *hangs on every word* I'm obsessed....

-Karie

YAY! They did it! Now they need to escape, but they did it. And no more boys are ever going to be hurt. *happy dance*

I so hope they kill Conti! Heh, I did make comments before but I think they kind of got jacked by the site. Anyway, as intriguing as ever, keep it up. Hey is there a way to pre-order the 2nd volume of Blurring the Lines?

Wow, nothin' like a knife fight to start out the night. ^_^
I don't know if you read this in my last review or not but I hope they don't die. But if they die protecting each other, it wouldn't be so bad. I guess this story is going to only be up a couple weeks longer. *sigh* Its been fun. I'm gonna miss it.