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for Heroes And Ghosts

by flintywoman

person Cimorene
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story! Each night I click in to see the next installment, wishing you would write faster...LOL But as a writer myself, I know not to rush a good thing. Keep up the good work!
person Memme
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Blech! Long weekend and I\'m too darn tired to read past a bit in the story, but what a great beginning!!!! :) I sure can\'t wait to dive into this one!
person Brekke
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hurray! A new chapter, I\'m so excited with this story and I love how you\'ve created a universe that is playing off of your other story! Ca\'t wait for the next part,

Brekke
person AsyenMari
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sarah,
Nice start to this one, do continue. I like the scifi feel, just be careful not to let it get to tecchie!!!
Asyen
person keyonnamc
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am getting kind of antsy waiting for the next update. I loved this update. I am so happy that the PETT did not have permanent damage. I cannot to see what happens next.
../\\_/\\
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()().()()
person Flamingolo
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You. Kick. So. Much. Ass. Excellent work.
person Susanna
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very cool! I like your style and am already in love with this story so keep updating, won\'t ya?
person some chick
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eeee!!! it\'s so cute!!!! WHAT\'S IT\'S NAME?!?! i feel weird calling \"him\" an \"it\". i can\'t believe it can\'t talk though. will it ever talk? i kinda wish it would. maybe not at first, but later on. eh. whatever it\'s your fic, i think i know what you\'re doing. still hearts to you cos this is fucking awesome!
person Tamela
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is sooooooo good!! What a creative story line!!! I am so gonig to enjoy how this all works out. And there is going to be no sex???? Awwwwwww oh well, then the characters will keep me interested. Very good characterizatins and the story is coming along nicely. I love the bugs too!!!
person Lada
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story and very interesting so far! I feel sorry for a beautiful pet of Ichi. Seems like that company just has created a sex slave. I hope that he will become something more for Ichi than a pleasure slave. Still a man is without a name. I have a feeling that Ichi is gonna break all that rules of keeping a pet. Surely very interesting could it be a miracle if a pet has more brain and able to learn than they explained it in their manual. Thanks for a wonderful story!