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for Heroes And Ghosts

by flintywoman

person alosadone
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squeeee!* Your writing is, as usuall, magnificent! I love the way you detail your characters, and your style is always wonderful. I hope you\'ll update soon, because this really is a very good piece.
person Memme
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wonderful! And poor Rye! I love how they were finally able to sense something from him. makes one wonder just how he ended up here. Of course, my imagination is supplying all manner of reasons and ways for him to have ended up able to understand AND acting as he is, but I\'m sure that not one of my ideas will be the final one. Which is wonderful, because then I\'m completely surprised!

I can\'t wait to find out what the results are! Feel somewhat like I\'m sitting there in that room, watching and all.

Another marvelous chapter! Again! Again! Again! *L* And as always, looking forward to the next one. :)

~Memme
person darkangel1210
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man I love both your stories! This just keeps getting bette and better! Love the plot!

Update soon this is getting good! Hope some hot steamy sex ensues!

person Chari
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is so sweet....
person s_hill
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i\'m so hooked i\'m sitting here pushing the refresh button repeatedly in hopes that you updated in the three seconds i looked away from the copmuter.
person AtsumiHaruko
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really good story, lovely characters. I\'m looking forward to reading how Ichi\'s and Rye\'s relationship develops. Keep going! ^_^
person Grey
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I just *knew* that I was making a mistake by not reading this story. I somehow missed your name, and I kept skipping over it, but there was always this niggling feeling of unease letting me know that this was something I *should* be reading. I break down, I get to the middle of chapter one... and I actually say out loud, \"Oh, it\'s *her*!\" And wow, a new story from you is cause for celebration. It\'d actually call for something like a largier, flashier Mexican hat dance, but I\'d rather go back and reread your other stories so I think I\'ll be skipping that.

...er, right. Actual relevent commentary: I love Ichi, I love the backstory, I *always* love the backstory, and I can\'t wait to see what\'s going to happen. Whew. Good day.
person Bunny_Doll
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is the best story I\'ve ever read so far!! ^_^ I love it update soon pleeeeeeeease!!
person supergirlanna
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay!!!! sooo sweet!!! omg!!! i am soooo enjoying this!!! keep updating!!!
person Anon
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhhh so cute.. he sounds like a hottie