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for Heroes And Ghosts

by flintywoman

person imbar
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still love the story. Though you left off on a rather evil cliffhanger... I\'ll be eagerly awaiting the next update.
person Saetan
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, where to start. There\'s just... so much to say. Brilliant story... I mean. Just brilliant. I wish I wasn\'t so sick or I would definitely be more coherent. I just love the dynamic of the pair. I want Rye to grow more disobediant though... push things a little. I can just see Ichi getting all razzled over it. Well, tomatoe soup is beckoning. If you need a muse or something, feel free to email or AIM me at \"Nelo Anjello\".
person Nezumi
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love Rye! If Rye\'s former owner hurt him then the man deserves to be shot >:( This fic rocks. Please keep updating. Pwease?
person Lynn
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YEAH! I love new stories. I really like how this is beginning, and having read Outpost, i\'m glad of the return to the same world. Again i am impressed at your ability to come up with dramatically different, but all lovable characters. And i thank you so much for the consistant and quick updates.
person copper
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hurray for another (or two) chapters. This was excellent, I love Ichi and Rye. Especially the whole sensory thing. Just one thing, I hope you don\'t mind me saying, but when you say Person A is dieing - the actual spelling is dying not dieing.
person some chick
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O omg! HE TALKED!!! YAYE!!!
person MultifacetedTune
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aawww, what an adorable idea!!! I love it!!! ^^ *still a pile a mush after reading chapter 5* Honestly, I don\'t know why I\'m surprised. You\'re an excellent writter, and I know I\'ll grow to love this fic just as much as I loved the other two fics of yours that I read. ^__~ Again, a wonderful, creative idea, and quite well written. I simply adore your characterizations and descriptions!!! I can\'t wait to find out what happens next -- keep up the good work, and update ASAP!!!
person Dana
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That\'s so sweet!
The shirt thing was so endearing!
Please continue :)
person Flamingolo
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I swear each fic you write catches the attention in completely new ways...I think this is my favorite of the fics you\'ve done so far, but I\'m kind of a biased science geek ^_^ Smashing job twining sci and fi together, and as always your characters are addictive; perfectly fleshed out tidbits delivered with nice sublety. Keep it up!
person keyonnamc
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved the update. Rye does not seem to have had a prier owner. He acts so much like a human. I think it is cute that Ichi and Rye are getting along better. That was nice of someone to put blankets and pillows in the lab for Rye. Cannot wait for further updates.
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