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i knew it!!!lol.. update soon.. hopefully tomorrow

SIlver

This story has so much potential it\'s frightening, and it\'s just so addictive and compelling. Really like the way that you write, it makes the less believable parts perfectly possible and the characters feel like real acquaintances that you are enjoying getting to know. Eagerly looking forward to the next chapter.

Wow... I\'d thought some kind of behavioral reconditioning or something equally horrendous, but the reality is far, far worse! And yet there\'s hope!!!

I loved how Ichi didn\'t quite take either of his friends\' advice. Rather, he felt out his own way through the situation. He knew Rye better than anyone so he was probably the best person to be deciding. And how wonderful is the way he did it!

I love the final reaching out too! Awe! Makes me want to just scoop Rye up and hug him and hug him and hug him! :) How cute!

Anyway - gorgeous chapter.. AGAIN... and so very smooth. I love the way the writing just seems to flooooow. Yay!

I am always excited to wake up and see another chapter and always totally bummed that I have to wait until evening to open up the website and get to it. And I love that I\'m looking forward to something all day long! Nice going! And I am looking forward to the next chapter!

All I can say is that if you were dyslexic, you\'re not now! Your grammar is awesome and your spelling is awesome! If this is truly unedited, coming right out through those marvelous fingers of yours, then you\'re years ahead of most of everyone else! (Coming from someone who can\'t write a thing without slipping in the wrong word or having to go to the dictionary or all that normal junk)

I don\'t know how fast you update but this is just simply amazing. I loved it. If I could buy it as a book I would. I loved your characters, they\'re really rich and real. Your writing style is simple and easy to understand. I like how you\'ve developed your own timeline and world, you make it work. Keep it up and I will definitely be looking forward to your next update!!

Hey, I\'m just reviewing to let you know that I\'ve read all your stories and enjoyed them immensely. I finally came to my senses and decided to review and let you know that, because reviews always make me/everyone happy! Actually, I was just sort of feeling like some fiction reading when I came upon this, because non-thinking doll people and people having relationships and/or sex sort of creeped me out. Once I started reading it though I started to enjoy it more, and more as more chapters came out. And (after chapter 8) now that I know the doll actually thinks and will hopefully soon become more animate, I\'m liking it even more! - - I like how you don\'t have fake characters or rush into the plot without any thought. Your characters seem so realistic in their feelings and you\'re writing style is wonderful. I think you should pursue a novel sometime...-- if you\'re interested( it\'s something I\'m going to try) in a writing challenge there\'s one at nanowrimo.org in appreciation of the National Novel Writing Month. The challenge is to write in one month ( no writing and only planning until November 1st) a minimum of 50,000 word novel. -- Eagerly looking forward to your next post, Fury

I love this story! It\'s moving along at a perfect pace and you have a lovely balance between plot and \"good stuff\". ^^ I look forward to future updates!

AWE! And just when I thought it coudn\'t get any cuter *snikers* I love you\'re stories you update really fast unlike some people. *wink* *wink* *nudge* *nudge*

Wow, okay so I normally try to occasionally post something to at least thank all of you for reading but life has been been wild. I swear when a story wants out all I can do is sit and write! Insane!

I\'m sorry to leave this night\'s chapter where I did, (chapter seven), please don\'t kill me. I haven\'t had time to finish the following scene so I didn\'t want to get into it and be an even worse tease! Updates may not be daily from here on as I am now caught up to my \'written ahead\' section and time is getting limited to sit and pound more out. Sorry about that but I\'ll do my best.

To all of you, thank you thank you thank you. You\'ll never understand how much it means to me that the people in my head are enjoyed by other people! It\'s truly humbling and wonderful!!!

Copper and anyone else new, please forgive the mispelling and such. I am horribly dyslexic. I couldn\'t spell my own name until I was 12. No Lie. So, all I can say is, I\'m posting the story raw, as it\'s come straight from my head. If the mistakes are too much I\'m sorry but there are plenty of stories on here to read. I never claim to have any skill at this, I\'m just trying to be amusing. And that\'s a sad applogy from a gal that was humilated for years over her lack of spelling and grammer skills...

Also, if you\'re new, I\'ve three full novels up and finished, if you haven\'t found them and like my stuff, feel free to look them up!

Whew, okay, Ichi and Rye... things are going to take some odd turns so... hold onto your hats folks. I like playing in this world so.... (insert trademarked evil laughter here)

Off to write while I\'ve the time! Thanks again everyone!

Sarah

yay! i was rooting for this... i hated how you described the human P.E.T.S. as.. well.. animals... but i\'m really happy that rye seems to be the exception w/ human qualities ^_^ please keep up the good work~ i\'m soooo sucked into this story..and i\'m also reading The Lies We Tell ^_^ great stories.. though it doesn\'t help my homework situation much -_- :P