rate_review Reviews

I\'m in love with you! This story is so good. I don\'t konw what to say without repeating myself! Sooo...love to the story!

I love you. It\'s like you update two chapters a day! You totally rock

I apologise if my comment about the spelling hurt you. I did read your forewords and I know you are dyslexic and I think it is amazing how well you write. Even if you had no language problems, the way you tell your stories are wonderful. When I wrote the comment about dieing and dying I had meant to it be as help only.

Anyways, I really enjoyed chpater 7 and yay to the new plot twist!

Awesome. I KNEW Rye had to be aware, that he couldn\'t be just a pet. Why was someone so cruel to him? :\'( This is a really sweet fic!

ZOMG Zarya!!!!!!!!! I knew when we talked the other night I was right...*sobs* Poor Ichi...*sobs some more* I lvoe you...update..(btw the sexy scene with Rye molesting Ichi against the counter..UBER hawt. I had tp pause halfways through it for a brief break)

Lotsa Love,
Abi-chan

Wow i can\'t wait till we find out who did it to Rye and why!

Holy shit! Last time I looked, this story had like, 25 reviews.

You\'re such a great writer; I have no problems trying to figure out what you\'re describing, I love your use of imagery, and I can see what you\'re talking about perfectly in my mind. I sometimes have difficulties concentrating enough to able to picture certain things that occur in other stories, but I\'ve never had trouble with it in any of your stories because of the way you write things. I wish you luck on finding a professional editor, and I hope to see Blurring the Lines in actual print soon.

As I\'ve stated previously, Rye\'s too fucking cute. He\'s just, I don\'t know, the way you describe his movements and the way he\'s so timid, it makes me giggle. I wish you wouldn\'t have ended the chapter right there, I\'m all excited now. I want the next installment!

I really can\'t thank you enough for the great read. You\'ve got an awesome talent.

I\'m getting a bit [actually a lot more than just a bit] pathetic here. Why? Because I\'m checking this site about twice a day just to see if you\'ve updated or not. This is by far the best fic I\'ve ever read and I\'m being serious here. You\'ve really nailed everything with this story with the world it\'s set in, the characters and not to mention the originality of the plotline!

This is one of the few stories I\'ve read that has made me think that maybe, just maybe, the story is actually made by a professional author who\'s having a break from traditional novel writing. And I\'m being serious here! I just adore everything about this story!

So keep updating will you? These wonderful chapters are really making my days worth going through [and as sad as it is that my life is so small that I get so much enjoyment from fanfic, it\'s still true]!

I love the update. Rye\'s talking now that\'s a great sign. I feel bad for Ichi, I think he was more closer to his mom than his dad. And the way they greeted each other, and the way his father said his mother died with little emotion was cold. Their way of dealing with things is cold and lonely. I am happy Ichi have people who care about him that much to let him grieve. Keep the updates coming...
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I discovered your stories recently, and in one word: excellent.