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for Heroes And Ghosts

by flintywoman

person Brekke
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hurray for Sarah!!! ^_^ Wow... WOW... *giggle* I can\'t believe how far you\'ve come with this story!! It\'s so wondeful, I love how you\'ve kept it moving foreward, not too fast, but not too slowly either. I like the sexual tension that you\'ve placed between them and how you\'ve handled it. Wondeful like always, can\'t wait to read the next parts!!
person michelle
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love your stories, you are one of my favorite writers. and I really like it that you update so often. You are a very goog writer, thank you foo all your stories!
person frivera
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am -SO- glad I decided to check this section..! This story is the best piece of original fiction I\'ve ever read! It inspires me! Makes me want to draw the characters and some of the scenes. Hell. I\'m sure it would make an awesome comic. I look forward to learning more about Rye\'s past and his and Ichi\'s possible future.

@.@ Btw, why can\'t I think up wonderfully awesome ideas like this?!
person Fury
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh it was wonderful! Rye and Ichi are just so cute together, and it was a fluff chapter. And those are always good, but in a different good than angst chapters. Looking forward to more - Fury
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it is SO refreshing to see such a well written story like this! I\'m very very pleased and looking forward to more chapters. :)
person Chari
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thats so sad that his mom died, and the other people at the station are being so nice! but how could someone be sooo cruel to rye? he so sweet :\'(...anyway, great fic, keep up the good work!
person Peleia
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I was SO HAPPY to see a new fic from you so soon! I was already feeling withdrawls from the end of \'Lies\'. This looks like it\'s going to be lots of fun. Very twisted and bizarre but potentially sweet, too... Ichi is such a great character. I love him already. =)
person D.A.
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
....bear my children.

Kidding.

But I really do love this story. It very nearly made me cry, something I haven\'t done over a written ANYTHING in a very long time.

I love the characters, I love the humor and the drama and the romance. But what I love most is where this is going- you don\'t get stories like this on here anymore. Did you have the story planned out beforehand? It all seems so... I don\'t know. Like it fits together, all of it.

Hope to see more from you.

-Me-
person NieniSprings
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eeeee- I can\'t wait to find out what happens next! I love it all!
person imbar
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is so great. You\'re the only author I\'ve found so far who has a really good story and updates everyday. Normally it\'s one or the other. Thank you very much.