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for Heroes And Ghosts

by flintywoman

person Memme
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awe! An overly large stuffed animal! I love it!

Poor Ichi.. his life is just falling apart around his ears. And it was neat to get a small peek into Rye\'s head this time. It gave him a bit of \"roundness\" that wasn\'t there prior to this moment.

Beautiful chapter! And as always, looking forward to the next!
person Nezumi
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kyah! They are just so cute together! -^.^- SMUT!!! I\'m so happy that Rye is overcoming his fear of being touched by Ichi. But why do I get this odd feeling that you\'re going to make Ichi get hurt in the future? Ne, I\'ll just have to wait and see. Wonderful as always, keep up the good work. (I\'m going to go and read some of your other works later)

Nezumi

p.s. thanks for answering those questions for me!
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!! *cling* Pleeeeease tell me there\'s more too this?! Please?! I wanna know what\'s going onnnnnnn! *whimpers* What\'s going to happen to Ichi? And why in the friggen world is Rye so scared that something bad will happen?! ARG! *beats her head on the desk* You just leave these weird loose ends!
person supergirlanna
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have to aplaud you for your quick posts! thank you soooo much! and as always i am loving your work! this story is great! *huggles* thank you sooo much for posting! and keep it up!
person Susanna
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First thought after reading this latest chapter through? Awwwww! This story just keeps getting better and better and sweeter and cuter after each and every chapter. (Well, maybe the maggots weren\'t exactly cute but.. you know what I mean.)

I\'m just very much in love with both Ichi and Rye. It\'s amazing how you are able to make them so realistic and all, like when I\'m reading this story I have the feeling that I actually know the characters. Which is kind of.. scary.

This is very meaningless review cause I don\'t really know what to say, but just felt like dropping by and telling how much I like your story (actually your stories). You\'re very talented and I just hope you know that yourself.
person white
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG



I <3 your story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


so freaken hawt n GOOD.



XDDD
person Anonymous
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute.

You\'re wonderful.
person Sara
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww such a sweet ending to the chapter: made me smile!
person supergirlanna
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that is the hotest scene ever!!! sooo loving, soooo spicy, and soooo overwelming and they never actually screwed! u are a genius!
person Ali
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an absolutely awesome story I really love it. This is a very interesting way to put a story together. i really love all of the characters and I love the relationship between ichi and rye but my fav character is will, he is hilarious. I Can\'t wait to see how things progress between the two of them and see if rye remembers anything maybe they will catch the loser who did this to rye. So please update soon.
TTFN ^-^