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Smashing job, I just love how both their relationship and Rye\'s intellegence are progressing. You have a real gift for melding science fiction with rl, making the fic so wonderfully believable. Keep it up!

I love the update. Why does Rye feel that Ichi would get hurt by touching him? Or think something will happen period? I like that Rye is becoming more bold and can turn Ichi into jell-o and vice versa. Keep updating...
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GUFFAH!-falls over gasping and twitching- that was the hottest lemon scene I have ever encountered. Detailed or not, that was intense. Finalllyyyyyy and I hope they actually get to become true lovers soon...because this pairing is just too sweet. ;-;Great chapter!

Very. Very. Hot.

I love where this is going. Rye is adorable! And he\'s human O___O That was so weird to read so I reread that chapter about three times...xD I really didn\'t expect that! But then again, you write sooo well, I should have expected a twist of some sorts to show up sooner or later, eh? ;D

-Holds up Ichi x Rye sign- ^___^ Keep up the amazing work!

that was HOT ;0

Really wonderful writing! It\'s really great! :-) update soon... PLEASE! It just leaves me craving for more...

goddamnit, I should know better by now. Never Start Reading One Of Your Fics Late At Night. I thought, idiotically, I\'d read a chapter or two and finish in the morning but nooo, I just had to stay up way past when I should be in bed because you just had to be brilliant, didn\'t you? Once again with the fully realized, very visually engaging universe and the original characters and dynamic that is diffrent from every other character dynamic you\'ve written, so far. I really like this one. It manages to be hot and dramatic and still stay purely sweet. Not in a gooey fluffy way either, just sweet. Complicatedly simple, if that makes any sense. Nicely done indeed.

And we finally get a few glimpses into Rye\'s POV! I\'ve been waiting for that to happen..... ^__^ Yet another wonderful chapter, as was expected. I\'ve been wondering, do you pre-write your stories and THEN post them? Or do you write the chapters daily and therefore have no life? Or perhaps you truely are the spectacualrly talented author you appear to be......... ^__~ I can\'t wait for more -- keep up the good work!!!

O.O! Wow, so many updates since I\'d last been here. Way to go! I love the way that Rye and Ichi are getting closer, but I have a question. Are families in the outside world (the ones not based in Avalon) as detached with one another as Ichi\'s is? It didn\'t seem like Ichi\'s father cared that his wife died...and he doesn\'t seem to like Ichi very much. Oh well. Keep writing, you\'re doing a wonderful job.

O0;; WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME??! *attempts to run to the bathroom with crossed legs*

You freakishly talented writer! XDDD I freaking LOVE you.