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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a shift in the story. What a HUGE shift!!!!!!
I\'m shocked.. can\'t even think of what to say. I just want there to be more so I can run into the next chapter. Hopefully wihtout having to think too deeply.
Woah.
I\'m shocked.. can\'t even think of what to say. I just want there to be more so I can run into the next chapter. Hopefully wihtout having to think too deeply.
Woah.
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow getting interesting!! Maybe we\'ll find out from the captain about Rye\'s past?
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh.. wow... that was beautiful.. it was like when river just busted out into kick ass kung fu in serenity.. lol, yeah, don\'t ask.. but wow.. that was GREAT!!!!!! please keep up the good work! i\'m working on reading every single one of your works right now :)
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So... what is Rye? He was a pet and now... what a soldier? COOL!! He reemembered everything in like... ten milliseconds... YAY RYE!!
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome update. I love the new Rye, and it only took Ichi getting hurt to do it. I guess Rye wasn\'t just made for sex. It seems to me that his body is healing much faster now. I hope he doesn\'t get himself hurt badly or anyone of the other space station people: \'ONLY PIRATES!!!!!\' I hate pirates. (>_<)
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m at the very edge of my seat now!
I keep refreshing this page every so hours to check if you\'ve updated.
I don\'t know how anyone could\'ve rejected your work.
I keep refreshing this page every so hours to check if you\'ve updated.
I don\'t know how anyone could\'ve rejected your work.
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First let me say that I enjoy your long stories and reread them frequently. Sometimes it takes me a few chapters to really get involved with the stories, but once I do I go back to read the beginning. The short stories you posted didn\'t pull me in like the long ones do. I have to say that I was surprised when Rye began killing the pirates and revealed himself as a skilled killer, but I was intrigued and pleased by this development in the story. But after reading about the rest of the fight just now I have to tell you that whether you intended it or not I was highly amused when Rye stabs, repeatedly beats and shoots one of the pirates. Maybe I just have a morbid sense of humor, but as I was amused all the same. I\'m looking forward to seeing where you take this story. I\'ve thoroughly enjoyed reading it so far.
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12 was spectacular. Am waiting eagerly for 13, and checking every 4-5 to se if you have posted it yet. Please post soon!
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoohoo!!!! New chapter!!!!! *blink* Wow.... Worms.... Yuckeh.... *cringe* I hate creepy crawly things, poor Rye. That had to suck. ^^ But at lease he\'s getting better!
-Karie
-Karie
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey I have been reading this story from the beginning, and I have really liked it. So a few minutes ago I looked at your profile and I realized you were the author of The Lies We Tell and What the wind carries!! I loved both of those stories...guess I just like the way you write:). Keep up the good work!!!