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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW. that was unexpected!! so, rye\'s a killer first and a pleasure slave later. was he ever just a normal human? so glad they didn\'t get a hold of ichi, i would have had to enter the story and kick some ass myself!
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear God! What a twist! I love Rye even more than before now (if that\'s even possible). This is just insane! You\'re amazing. I have no idea how anyone\'s able to create something this original but I guess you just have it in you.
(Just started reading another one of your stories a couple of days back - the one with Mick and Toshi - and I can hardly breathe).
But yes, it\'s settled then. I wanna marry you ^^ Or something. You just keep on writing, right? Cause if you won\'t I will simply shatter. *whimper*
(Just started reading another one of your stories a couple of days back - the one with Mick and Toshi - and I can hardly breathe).
But yes, it\'s settled then. I wanna marry you ^^ Or something. You just keep on writing, right? Cause if you won\'t I will simply shatter. *whimper*
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^^ i\'d like some more now please.
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Discovered your stories earlier this week and have now read all of them. Wait impatiently for the next update! You are a very good writer. Also your language is getting better.
-keops- ^_^
-keops- ^_^
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is: WOW. I loved the fight scene, and especially how much you gave the impression that Rye was just an onlooker, even though he was the one doing all the fighting and killing people. He was acting purely on what he felt should be done, but HE wasn\'t the one doing it... gah, I\'m babbling now. Still, wonderful chapter. I know I don\'t review all that much, but there\'s always at least one person out there that you don\'t know, eagerly awaiting every new chapter you make. ^_^
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG you must write more, this is such a great series of chapters!
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! A new chapter! I\'m always excited when I see stories by you because they have just the right proportion of action, drama, and lovely smutty smut, and this story is certainly no exception. Rye kicked butt in this chapter...he better be all right after he whups some pirates so he and ichi can get on with some consummatin\'! Keep up the good work and wonderfully regular updates!
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
make us proud rye.. i think he deserves a lemon for his actions!
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap! Go Rye!
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!...Ichi\'s swarm it\'s, it\'s destoryed. I feel really, really bad for him. I hope he can pull throught this and not draw into himself. I know getting another swarm would not help him with the grief of his first batch. Update soon...
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