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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay an update! And two at once (or at least I think... been away a bit)! We find out more about Rye and what he\'s made for... ah your plots and characters and everything are always so well thought out and interesting. I can\'t wait for the next update! Soon please! -Fury
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome. real good sci-fi. keep it coming.
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well.... Wow.... *blinku* Rye rocks! Kill \'em Rye! Kill \'em! *maniacal laughter* *cough* Right. Poor Ichi~~~~!!!!!! He\'s so traumatized now... And what\'s he going to do without his critters now? Weren\'t they the whole reason he was even ON the station? *pouts* More chapters.... Pwease?
-Karie
-Karie
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello action and how about ripping my heart out, too? Excellent chappy, I\'m a little worried about how Ichi is gonna deal with the loss of his swarm, let alone Rye being a main factor. I love how smooth Rye\'s slip into \'mercenary\' was, and makes me really wonder just who is was before Ichi met him. Always looking forward to more from you!
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cries* that was soooo touching! so sad... *Sniffle* i can\'t wait to see what happens next between rye and ichi!
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aaaand, the real action begins. *claps* Brilliant, I\'m loving it! So, I guess Rye\'s real instincts are coming into play now, eh? I wonder if they\'ll be able to stay in the station after all this- or if the station will even still be intact. ^^ Every time I think this can\'t get any better, you post another chapter that proves me wrong. The plot runs smoothly, Ichi and Rye\'s growing relationship is believeable, and their emotions just make me want to beg to find out what happens next.
Can\'t wait till the next chapter, keep up the good work!
Can\'t wait till the next chapter, keep up the good work!
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful... simply beautiful
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OoOoOoOooooo........ a plot twist!!! ^__~ Very, very unusual and unexpected -- I can\'t wait for the next chapter! ^^ Thanks for the update, and keep up the good work!!!
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'re so cruel to Ichi... *sniffle*. I\'m so looking forward to Rye being the one who helps the poor, traumatized thing ;) \'Sides, I loved the way you described the action scenes. I\'ve had a fun time reading!
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww i love rye!