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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES! That was so sweet and yummy! I can\'t wait to see what happens next. Write more Write more Write more Write more Write more Write more Write more Write more Write more Write more Write more Write more Write more Write more Write more Write more Write more Write more Write more Write more Write more Write more Write more Write more Write more Write more Write more Write more Write more Write more ....pwease?
~Nezumi
~Nezumi
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! ^^;;; I feel like a geek, but it\'s about time!!! Ichi needed that sooooooo badly, lol!!! ^__~ Quite well done, as expected -- can\'t wait for the next chapter and the \"confrontation\" about the \"I love you\" comment..... ^^ Keep up the good work!
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story! I love Rye! He\'s so cool! Please Update soon! I want to know what happens!
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17 was just the right combination of mindless sex and adorableness. Nice work!
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story! I have to admit - initially, I started it for the smut, but now, 3 hours and 16 continuous chapters later, I am totally in love with Ichi and Rye. You are doing a great job with this story, from the storyline to the setting, the characters, their emotions (especially Ichi\'s), etc. I love the depth you gave your characters and Ichi\'s initial embarrassement and horror when his \'pet\' arrived was wonderfully written. You are very eloquent and articulate and your grammar and punctuation are excellent. That might sound odd, but it\'s rare to find a well-written story such as yours on this website (not to put down AFF, or anything...).
Love all the physical scenes, of course, and the bonding and deeper feelings between those two as well as Rye\'s transition from \'pet\' to \'human\'. I hope you will update soon, I am very curious as to where you are taking this and to find out more about Rye\'s background, etc.
Again, great job!
Greetings from Dany
Love all the physical scenes, of course, and the bonding and deeper feelings between those two as well as Rye\'s transition from \'pet\' to \'human\'. I hope you will update soon, I am very curious as to where you are taking this and to find out more about Rye\'s background, etc.
Again, great job!
Greetings from Dany
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Real, distinct characters, a well thought out plot, this story grabbed me and I put off other plans so I could finish all that has been published. I think it approaches commercial quality.
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAYE THEY DID \'IT\'!!!
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*is dead from the delicious prelude to Rye/Ichi sex*
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Rye is gonna be top, yeah?
Update soon!
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Rye is gonna be top, yeah?
Update soon!
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God I love the gentle lemons. Rape scenes kinda freak me out... Not in a girly type way, just that its really kinda disturbing that people find that a turn on.-shudders- anyways, loved the lemon scene, and the fact it was so long and detailed and gentle and slow and beautiful just made it all the more engrossing and I read it three times.-Sweatdrop- can\'t wait for the next chappeh!
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ack! More hanging endings! What\'s going ooooooonnnnnnn!!!!!! @.@ *confused*