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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! More about Rye! The way you wrote made it seem as if I was seeing it all happen myself. That\'s real talent. Your plots and backgrounds just... woo amaze me still. I can\'t wait for the next chapter! Waiting, Fury
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is the most AWESOME story I have ever read. I do not review anyone\'s story unless I think it a very well written, well plotable, ver well made characters, and other things. I think that this story, is the best that I have ever written, and I would like to say, that your writing is absolutly amazing. Please continue with your story, as I know you will, and I hope that this may be a book as well, as you have turned your other story into a book.
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a story! Get the feeling we\'re only half way there!!!
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh... my... god.... wow.... i\'m speechless! well, good twist in this story o_O still at bit stunned, but well written as always! keep up the good work
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O ......................wow. Umm, okay, I...uh...yeah. ^^;;; VERY interesting turn of events, to say the least!! Thanks for the update -- can\'t wait for the next chapter!
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg... what a plot twist.. i love it!! i encourage you to continue!!
silver
silver
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! Really! This chapter and the last one and all of them! Just... wow. You\'re story = my life. (1. get through day 2. go home 3. go on computer 4. check for updates) haha. Except for when I\'m away or so busy I know my whole \'work\' stuff will be ruined if I read, because I get too into it. So .. I \'m not sure if I reviewed last chapter, but it wasn\'t anything against it if I didn\'t! Just a busy week/weekend. Well, update soon please! -Fury
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AYEEE cliff hanger!! next chapter please ><
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FATHER?! *squick* Wow... I mean... Holy friggen\'... Wow.
-Karie
-Karie
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a beautiful chapter! And what an awful experience for poor Rye!!!! The mystery deepens. I can\'t wait to find out what happens next!