rate_review Reviews

Awww....wow....I LOVE this story! I had read this this morning then gone to school. Through out school I couldn\'t help but wonder what would happen next! Rye and Keichi are so cute! X3 They are absolutely adorable I wanna hug them both! Oh wow, I really can\'t wait till you update coz I\'ll be checking aff.net everytime I go online! X3

i actually started tearing up there at the end. *sniff*

Yay!!! *does the happy dance until she gets tired of her roomates \"are you INSANE???\" stares* Heh....... ^^;; Oh, shoot, I need to go back to RL now -- I have a paper due in a few hours... *pouts* Thanks for the wonderful chapter!!! ^__^

Holy shit!!!! I just read chapter 19. Oh my god!!! Awesome chapter. I can\'t believe it. Jez! please keep writing. Can\'t wit till tomorrow.

OMG!!! What a twist!! I can\'t believe that, now was it his biological father or step (Just out of curiosity) ?

I know I\'m only one of maaannnyy positive reviewers, but damn this is a good story. Not only are the basics there (great grammer, details, ect) but the plot developement, characters, and the story twists are increadable. You make your readers care deeply for all of your characters, including the \"secondary\" characters which many authors tend to neglect, giving them enough information to understand the characters but enough room for all the hidden secrets that lie in their pasts. Before reading this I was never really interested in futuristic stories but you\'ve definatly got me hooked and I eagerly look forward to each chapter.

I bow to you. You are a rare writer. I can hardly retain myself from constantly checking for your upates. Lol, I love your stories because of the way you write your characters. Lovely how you phrase everything and your characters are just so rich. They are practically real. You have a real great story going. Now.... any chance of you updating Yaoi Con Reject 2?

ohh my...that was a shock!

Hmmm, sneaky, didn\'t expect the daddykink. Just when I think that I have it all figured out you stick in a surprise twist. So refreshing, and of course written superbly, as usual.

Amazing updates. I really, really hate Rye\'s father. What could of father would do that to his son? That\'s just sick. I hope Rye gets a chance sometime in the near future to confront his father and cause him the same amount of pain he\'s caused Rye. Update soon.
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