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for Heroes And Ghosts

by flintywoman

person Fury
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*dreamy sigh* Well I guess that wasn\'t something to be dreamy over... but you\'re writing just makes me want to sleep in a fluffy bed and read it forever and ever and ever. You conveyed their emotions and actions so well... wow... I still can\'t get over the chapters! Much love to your story and you, Fury
person Dvana
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
boo.
person Chosa
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. Simple as that. I love it. Keep it up!!
person Dany
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent update! Love all the unexpected twists and Rye\'s flashbacks to the hell before he met Ichi. I\'m very curious about that \'father\' reference and I have a feeling we\'ll be meeting that particular man in person sometime down the road...I certainly hope so for Rye deserves his revenge.
I want to congratulate you on the incredibly hot love scene between Ichi and Rye...it was everything from insanely sexy to sensual to deeply emotional and moving - brilliantly done. And I actually had to put on my desk fan to cool off afterwards :)
Hope to see more of those scenes in later chapters!
Greetings from Dany
person Paige
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God, this story is going to kill me. x_x; I get all flustered about it. It makes me all emotional. I don\'t know if that\'s good or bad, but either way it\'s definitely because you\'re such an amazing writer. God. I cried at this chapter. First because I thought Rye was going to leave so I was sad, and then because they were so adorable with their love. Ahh I feel sappy. u__u;; and when they made love. my god. I cried, it was so beautiful. This story captures my interests so deeply. Everyday I get on my computer at least once, and the first thing I do is check and see if this story is updated. Now that I\'m sure you\'re tired of me ranting about how much I love this story, I\'ll end it. Mm, update as soon and as much as possible and make me all emotional some more.
Paige.x.
person Anon
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
he has a home!!!
person Ancalagon
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH! I just want to hug you for writing such a wonderful story! So, I will!!! HUG,HUG,HUG!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Gene
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another very beautiful chapter. :) I do look forward to Chapter 21.
person Nefertari
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God, i luv your story, no i do more than luv it. Thanks for the new chapter, thank you a lot. Thank you thousend times, oh luv you for this story. Thank you *super happy*
person Anon
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aw aw aw.. i love rye :)