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for Heroes And Ghosts

by flintywoman

person Paige
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hm, good. Sex is more casual for the two. I like to know that they\'re getting more used to each other. I\'m looking forward to seeing how the newly acquired information about Rye\'s previous \'owner\' will come into the story. Kill the bastard, I say. XD;
person Sara
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooooooooh very interesting!!! Can\'t wait for some more glimpses into Rye\'s past :)
person Kanzia
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Every time I read a new chapter for one of your stories, (I\'ve been following *cough stalking cough* your work since chapter 19 in What the wind carries ^^) I tell myself, right, when you get to the end of this, today is going to be the day you finally sit your lazy, review-writing-phobic ass down and tell this woman how amazing she is. Of course, I never have, since each and every one of your chapters/stories leaves me either needing a very cold shower or knocked for six! I honestly don\'t know how you do it, how you make everything so absorbing and practically life altering in the way you write your charaters. It\'s like you\'ve had Ichi and Alex round for tea and live with Toshi and Rye as room-mates for the past ten years! Thats how well you know your characters!

At the risk of sounding like a raving fan girl loonely, I\'m going to go ahead and say I\'m your biggest fan! :D Cheesy, I know, but I love you! I stumbled across one of your stories quite by accident (What the wind carries), and by the first chapter I was utterly, totally, hook-line-and sinkered! Nothing has captivated me so entierly before! I\'ll admit, I\'m very finiky- Usually I can\'t mannage a story more then ten chapters (since most the time all thats inbetween the meeting and the (inevitable) sex is nothing but filler), but I didn\'t want Alex and the wonderfull Dr to ever leave my life! I was practically suffering physical withdrawl symptoms, so you can imagine my joy when I found out that Toshi and Mick had been waiting for me all this time!

Your plots are engaging, your characters so real you can practically feel the sweat dripping off them when they get down to some wholesome smutty action (because, lets face it, where would a wonderful plot line and fantastic writing be without some writhing, sweaty male bodies ^.~) and I swear if I could I\'d take you home with me, set you in the corner of my room and have you tell me smut stories with plots that actually stimulate the mind as well as...Other places ^^

In short, I love you, adore you, worship you, and wonder if Hue will be ever get used to the interesting uses of Coles piercing :D
person Anon
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohh wow!
person Fury
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
.meep!. Wooooh! So much information and such little time to process it! Well not really, but so much more that I am incredibly happy! Poor Rye. I want to hug him. :) -Fury
person Allorna
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely fantastic!!!!!!!!!!
person Diz
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NUUUUU!! Don\'t stop! More! *many tears have been shed*
person cmar
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Had to pause here to say how amazing this story is. You\'ve taken an unlikely premise, first turned it into an excellent study of a lonely man in an unlikely relationship, and now taken a left turn into new and fascinating territory. Really, really excellent stuff.
person Mystic
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Here is yet another wonderfully creative story by you. As always, I was thoroughly impressed. You\'re characters protray raw, open emotions, that many authors can never distribute. That is why I love your writing. Ichi and Rye both have such powerful emotions that can literally suck a reader into your stories. The idea and plot behind the story is amazing--a human doll coming to life. Brilliant. When I read your summary, it caught me a bit off guard, to be honest. It sounded like erotica, and I\'m not one for erotica. I adore love stories, the emotional kind. That\'s why I was pleasantly suprised when I began reading and found that your story, in fact, was a love story. I love the fresh plot and the honesty of the characters. Please continue you\'re wonderful writing and I\'ll look forward to reading it!
person Angela
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aaawww that chapter was so sweet.