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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it\'s me again, i\'m still here!!! and i still LOVE the story!!! thanks for updating!!!
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... you really caught me off guard there: \"I killed him.\" - meep!. Then I thought: no... he can\'t be dead. Where would the story be? - hah. But you really got me there for a second. IT was amazing! Truly! Been awhile too! Waiting .... sort of patiently, Fury
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It\'s one of the best I\'ve read so far. ^^ Trust me, I never ever ever read long stories if I can help it, but damn xD I like this one. Made me late this morning because I couldn\'t stop reading ^^
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter! Loved Will\'s story of his background; dark and believable and to use the tale of his childhood to coax Rye out of his dismayed state was brilliant. I like Will almost as much as Ichi and Rye. The \'reunion\' scene between Ichi and Rye was wonderfully poignant.
Please update soon; I haven\'t been hooked on a story like this in a long time!
Greetings from Dany
Please update soon; I haven\'t been hooked on a story like this in a long time!
Greetings from Dany
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter! We like those...and Rye! I really don\'t think he could hurt Ichi. I know he has the power, but they\'re too much in love! Did Rye really think that Ichi would blame him and actually beat him for it! Crazy! But I\'m so glad they\'re in love, because it\'s so cute! Update please!
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hiii. I\'m sorry I\'ve never reviewed before, but I was speeding through the perviously written chapters so fast that I just couldn\'t stop! I just adored this chapter. I\'ve had a really stressful night, and all the cuteness made me feel a ton better. Really, I thank you so much for putting your time and energy into your stories and updating almost every other day! If I could hug you for that, I would. I\'m in love with your writing, so keep going! More fluff, all the way!
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent new chapters! Love Rye\'s angst. You wrote his inner torment after his latest memories wonderfully...well, tormenting. This new plot development with the DNA\'s results is getting very intriguing. I can just picture Rye, armed and in camouflage, infiltrating the Lerman Securities Building and going after his old tormentor :)
Eagery awaiting the next chapters!
Greetings from Dany
Eagery awaiting the next chapters!
Greetings from Dany
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhh wow... i love ichi reaction...maybe it\'ll lead to a lemon!
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. You\'re an extremely talented writer. This story had an excellent and very believable plot. Which is hard for most sci-fi writers to do. I loved that you actually put in scientific talk into it and didn\'t just skip around it. I can\'t wait to see how it ends! Love this story. Highly recommended.
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just read chapter one! Great beginning! I\'m loving it!