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for Heroes And Ghosts

by flintywoman

person MultifacetedTune
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, yes, but one must wonder what \"So be it.\" REALLY means.......... ^__~
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hate to say it but Chpt. 28 was sorta boring. Right something exciting and yaoi-filled next chapter! Don\'t worry I still love your story and you. Oh, your story gives me the same feeling that I had when I read Sphere by Michael Crichton. I love that feeling. Of course when you get to the yaoiness I get that tingly feeling in my pants. ^-~
person Sara
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm i was wondering does Jake know Rye from somewhere or does he recognise something about him? It just seems theres more than meets the eye between the two or maybe im reading too much into it........?
person Mystic
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love Ichi! I love Rye! I love them. Amanda and Will are a nice couple too, but I love ICHI AND RYE! More please, I love it. They\'re so wonderful, delectably sweet. I could lick them up with honey! Mmmmm.....
person Fury
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Wow these past chapters have made me just... well not be able to do anything else after for a long while. Hah! But I loved them to bits. Thanks for this story... so far it\'s been more than amazing. Sorry I didn\'t review, with performances and everything I havn\'t had time. But I hope you know that I love this story and your writing a lot! - Fury
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woah! Chapter 25 was your best chapter so far! The confession made me cry and the sex scene was so fucking hot. You\'re fucking awesome.
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. It\'s good to see Will getting some action once in a while.
person Sara
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice to see the relationship between Will & Amanda too ;)
person Shadowfox13
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Now that\'s what I call sizzling. Hmm....I noticed, Rye\'s more the dominant, eh? Does Ichi ever take him? Or do they just prefer the roles they have now?
person MultifacetedTune
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, it\'s about time! Ichi reeeeeeally needed to get that out, lol! ^^ Very powerful and well done -- can\'t wait for more!!!