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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good beginning. This seems like a promising story with the first chapter and the summary. It would get a lot more attention if you posted this in Erotica/Sex or atleast Slash. Just trying to help. Consider it, though.
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eww. XD \'Tis a good start. I don\'t mind short introductions.
One thing: I believe the word is \"dyed\" if it\'s referring to dye, rather than \"died\", which refers to death. Anyway...
Keep it up! :-)
One thing: I believe the word is \"dyed\" if it\'s referring to dye, rather than \"died\", which refers to death. Anyway...
Keep it up! :-)