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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh
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October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m sorry, but this is a pretty gross story. I\'m not usually offended by works of fiction, but these unspeakable acts happen every day in the real world, which makes it different. It wouldn\'t be as bad if the sex weren\'t non-consensual, in other words, if the kids liked their lives for whatever reason. No disrespect to your skills as a writer, but I am just letting you know that you have lost a reader.
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October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woah. That was great. I was nearly in tears for poor Shannon.
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October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the way the plot is going, I like your characterization, and I hope you keep writing this well. As much as I\'d like to see more with little Jessica, learning as much as I can about your dark world is just as much fun.
I\'ve added this to my Recommended Reading. Mazel tov!
CP the twisted
I\'ve added this to my Recommended Reading. Mazel tov!
CP the twisted
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October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was good keep going and post soon
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooo... this is very disturbing but that hasn\'t ever stopped be before. I\'m loving it already and already, from Chapter 1, I\'m getting turned on.
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh and u stopped at 4!!! I like the evil, twisted grin. I wanna know what happens!
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad chapter. The sex was about like I\'d expected it to be - you aren\'t glorifying this by having the children enjoy it and that\'s more real than the countless terrible shota fics I\'ve read. I\'m curious to see where you\'ll be going with this next, so write more soon!
CP the deviant
CP the deviant
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep going and post soon
bye bye
bye bye
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lets get it up!...