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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
~wonders if you\'re going to update soon ~
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
.... I still relate the story to the Nazi medical crimes... But wow, good job on that!
I\'d go for a little less brutality though... just a personal thought. Meby even a little Kid/Kid???
I\'d go for a little less brutality though... just a personal thought. Meby even a little Kid/Kid???
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story, keep up the good work. i see this going into the double digits for chapters. I for one plan to keep reading...
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a very good story keep going and post soon
bye
bye
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really nice story, if a little wierd! I am enjoying it alot and would love it if you could please write more.
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I have my reasons for enjoying this as much as I do. They just aren\'t the kind of thing a person admits to in a story review. This chapter was good, George is evil but he has morals to not sell his kids to someone like those two batards. I don\'t mind Shannon happening to have my name. And how did you find that out? It\'s not on my author page...you been to my LJ?
CP the curious.
CP the curious.
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful writing, great characters (and sex)... and I\'m glad George has human feelings. It makes the story easier to understand.
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its interesting to say the least. I am curious as to which way you will take this and how realistic you will keep the situation.
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Disturbing