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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You took what could have possibly been a recipe for disaster (or at least a ton of flames) and made something very nice out of it. It definately isn\'t for everyone but if your tastes run towards the twisted, this is an awesome story. And no matter what you say, you\'ve got plot sprinkled through there despite yourself.
Keep up the good work!
Keep up the good work!
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Im interested to read what happens next. please update as soon as possible!!
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No, actually CP, she\'s nine...which is when, I know, I started getting really curious about it, and the stuff I was learning about in school didn\'t tough on the \"finer points\" if you will... And trust me, if the character was seven, I probably would have handled it differently :) Regards, Katie
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was good keep going and post soon bye bye
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter. I love how the character of George is so manipulative and controls Jessica so well.
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked that chapter, even if I think 7 (that\'s Shannon\'s age, right?) is a little on the young side to have curiosity about sex. From experience, I know I \"started young\" and got curious around 9. But you\'re handling the material well; I won\'t be too disturbed when this gets more progressed. Keep it up.
CP the bored
CP the bored
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So cute! Update please! You are the only story I keep coming back too!
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it\'s very..interesting, your characters are very rounded =]