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for Candyland

by kate4114

person shypup
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story its the best I read so far.LoL ^^
person shino
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved the story hope you wright more soon before school starts backup.
person Melissa
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alright...i just flat out love your story...i cant wait for the next one.
Very well written, a little bit twisted at times but hey, its a story right.
person reading
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh wow. this is amazingly good.
person Cam
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Anon=Cam

Yep I love you :P Look forward to the next updates :)
person 2wolfsistersLOgan
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ya gotta update please e-mail me when u update
person Anon
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XD XD XD i love this story. it\'s awesome :D
person Anon
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'d love you forever if you updated this soon D:
person Kai L. Sesuke
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Though i reluctently enjoy reading metiral of such nature i do not in any way condone acts of any sexual nature between minor\'s and adults, that said i feal better. I am in love with story, the esence of reality is there, though it shows some what out of reality. My Girl frien is a medical student and with her knowlage after reading stories like this it is nice to find one or two that fit with reality. I have read stories of men pushing all the way through a childs cervix, witch i am told is imposible, you have kept to some reality by not over doing the sex sceens and kept my interest by not under doing them. The sceen with Jessica and Geoarg in the theatre steup is exactly how i would expect a child to act, my girlfriends kids through no act of mine have been indtroduced to sexual matirals and acted almost the same way with slight variations.

I would absolutly love it if you were to update this story, not to rush but make it soon please.

A new Fan, Kai.
person SetoKaibaWheeler
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holy crap!!! good!!!! update!!!!!!