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for Candyland

by kate4114

schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved it update more e-mail me when ya do
person sassyspicegurrl
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow!!! two updates so close together!!!!!!!! i really liked making shannon the heroine--sort of a motherly figure. much better than everyone gang raping her.
person amberfirewire
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! I mean okay but I really wanted George to take her virginity. I honestly don\'t see her recovering in any semi-realistic/plausible way if she\'s taken by those kids and then when George goes to be with her... well I can only see one big mess. However, if you must I wouldn\'t mind the result being that other bitchy little girl getting sold off because George gets rid of her to keep Jessica safe.

Nervously looking forward to more.
person sassyspicegurrl
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is kinky--i really REALLY like it!!!! keep writing and update soon--the whole kid/kid thing sounds H.O.T.!!!
person Anon
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey I loved it please update
person Anon
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its alright.
person cc
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good job
person sup
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woah
person Anon
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"blink\" okay
person Anon
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
do a kid on kid