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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting story. Could have been a little bit more descriptive when George visited Shannon and Luke for the first time in the story, but I won\'t complain. I also find gang-rape very wrong, as some of my female friends have had the misfortune to lost their virginity to such acts. At least that\'s not the case here. I\'m not flaming in any way, since I myself am a sick person and enjoy stories about sex with minors, as well as incest, although I myself am not a practitioner of either. I hope you update this story soon, I\'m eager to find out if George kicks those boys\' asses for what they did to that sweet girl.
~Ace J. Jones
~Ace J. Jones
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, I love this story. please allow me to be a huge fucking fan of yours!!! :) can\'t wait for the next chappy!
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that would rock if she was fucked by a dog
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the new chapter! Like you mentioned, it was hinted that Shannon was out for Jessica but I liked the twist where she actually became the heroine. Nice job!
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice, I like this story and I hope you continue it soon,
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poor kid!!!!
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was very very good keep going and post soon
bye bye
bye bye
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
totally wasn\'t liking this last chapter - I hope George skins their asses for hurting Jessica - interested to see what happens next.
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!!!!^^
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story!! very well-written. I LOVE it! I admit though that I would HATE for Shannon to be made out to be some kind of bitch by harming Jessica. I think writing her that way would make me turn off from the story quite a bit. I feel pretty badly for her and I don\'t want George to necessarily look \'better in comparison\' to Shannon by writing her up to be a bitch just so that George can conveniantly be her protector. I\'m FAR more interested in Shannon\'s character than anyone else\'s. If you write her as a bitch than fine but please don\'t oversimplify it and have her end up being nothing in the end. As far as I can see, Shannon the star of this story.... and i enjoy it! Shannon has all these layers to her that i love reading
again, i;m really enjoying it. you\'re a great writer,
again, i;m really enjoying it. you\'re a great writer,