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for Candyland

by kate4114

person Anon
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very very well written, I hope you finish it.
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ya need to update I love it
person bibliophile
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
realy good midly sick (but in a good way) story.

person pyrohottie
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
she sounded so cute and adorible. but your story still is gross but not gross
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think that you\'re handling this story much better than the majority of the pedophilia that I\'ve come across on this site. Can\'t wait to see how you write it when the actual noncon comes about, but I have faith in you. Your villain is just twisted enough to hate and at the same time, a part of me can relate to his feelings. Please keep up the very good work.

CP the happy
person l\'etje
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
post post post sooooooooooon
person BloodQueenFromHell
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...sick and oh so twisted...fucking great, update soon.
person sassyspicegurrl
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! this looks AWESOME so far, keep updating!! and HURRY!
person l\'etje
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice it is something new
keep going and post soon
bye bye
person Demon CHild
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its good that you are doing this story very descripively rather than just a usual PWP..