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for Candyland

by kate4114

schedule July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really wish you could finish this. It is excellently written, and realistic. I read this when you first posted it, and had to work so hard to find it again, hoping you had finished it. Please don't make me sad!
person Anon
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
X-comon plz post AMFG
person CooCoonut
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It seems like the characters a loosing a lot of what drew me to the story in the first place. I liked that George was so harsh in the begining , but now he seems to be falling a part. I don't like it. I do like the sudden plot turn however. It really keeps me holding on to reading because I really want to know what is going to happen. I love this story. So good job and keep writing.
person Anon
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update
person Avatar
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is immoral, disgusting and despicable... but one of the best pieces of writing I have ever seen on this site. A job well done to be sure.
person ....................
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WTF. UPDATE DAMNIT UPDATE WTF WTF WTF
person mary
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
im not flaming you, i just wanna know why?
person Palacost
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
u writen this anymore?
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a clever, entertaining piece of fiction...I look forward to chapter 15...
person sevensins
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update soon