rate_review Reviews

This storys pretty good! plz keep writing!

AWESOMENESS!!!! Plz continue! you just need 2 work on a few tense-errors, but otherwise, perfect!

Thank you for your Review and feedback.
Yeah, I kinda suck at the editing bit, but I\'ll get better with time!
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What part did you like most about Chapter 4?

I read up to chapter 3 and the notation.
A very interesting if not enigmatic tale so far.
Dark forshadowing jusrt right and the introspective was quite unique.

Then again I can\'t really do introspecives in my stories worth a damn anyway?
All in all a unique fiction to read It caught my most um how can I put it? Unique intrest?

*Shrugs*
Sue me I am part pervert! Then again so to is the whole human race, I am meerly more honest than most.

BrianDarksoul~

keep writing i love the story !!!

thats too mean... not cool, not cool at all... i hope that you up-dates soon im gonna go kill myself if you dont...

Ok I really like where your going with this story. Teenage lust, masturbation, and lycanthropy whats not to like? This is just a shot in the dark but is Tommy the creature that attacked clover? Maybe thats why he keeps sneaking out. Hmm I wonder. The masturbation scene was a nice touch. Ive yet to read one where the person actually talked to themselves while doing. Talking dirty really works for me and it was nice to see it incorporated into masturbation. Alots happening and its only the first night of the babysitting. Now clover has transformed. What will she do? What will Tommy do when he finds her that way? Are they going to fuck in animal form? Ok so Ive got a few questions. Please keep writing! Dont let the lack of reviews get you down. At the very least I want to know what happens, whatever thats worth. When youve put more out Ill try to write a longer and more in depth reveiw. Good luck with your writing! ^_-

Like the story! Really hope to see more soon. The cliffhangers, I have seen many other stories with them and I for one like them though I don’t like waiting. But in a way, that would either keep the readers coming back or they would become uninterested. This is the first I have read this so I don\'t know the rate of the updates you give. Anyways, hope to see more soon!

i really really hate cliff hangers and i wanna kno what happens. Your story is really interesting please write more i hate being left hanging lol.

Ok, I\'m intrigued. Looking forward to the next chapters.