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Thank you b.d.

I\'ll be going over previous chapters later this week and correcting them all as best I can for spelling and grammar.

Also Some time next week Im going to start a new line of stories entitled \"Little Red Riding Hood, and Other Erotic Fairy Tales\"

A new friend of mine gave me the idea, and I really have to say \"Thank you!\". Its a fantastic Idea!

Anyone have a Fairy tale they would like to see redone? ^_^

Really good so far.

I loved it you must update it

i cant wait to see what happens when they wake up!!!

\"Gods... I read chapter four twice, and now I\'m soon headed for a cold shower^_^;;\"\"

Now the effect I was looking to inspire in people!!!

hey, i thought this was very well written...a slightly different take on the typical werewolf and i liked it. the use of sexual language was good and didnt seem awkward like in some stories. there were some editing problems though...just spelling and the like, all i can remember without hitting the back button is seeing 3 errors in the 2nd to last paragraph. try reading the story backwards to correct spelling errors, it really helps!

P.S. If you enjoy my story you may also enjoy the works of
LeoLobo at http://alphaluna.keenspace.com/index.html
and http://www.loboleo.tfcentral.com/comic/

Both are excelent sites! Also Lessthenhuman is another fantastic artist, her picture here http://www.deviantart.com/view/10634625/ is what inspired me to write \"Clover\'s Tale\".

WOWOW! That was awesome. I can\'t believe that ppl would read that and not tell you how good it was. Maybe the fact that there is not any action in the first two chappies? I don\'t know but, I hope that you continue this fic. I want to see more.

Things get hot indeed! Another great installment. Damn Im horny..but yeah. This chapter is very fast paced. Lots of action. No thinking, just feeling. You really tapped into the animal instinct. Clover stretched out on the bathroom floor like a bitch in heat, and then Tom just busting in and fucking her. Whoo! Me personally Ive got a thing for submission, and I know Ive already told you this but Clover bearing her throat just really got to me. Absolute surrender to her desire when she doesnt even fully understand it. I wonder what will happen when they wake up in this precarious position. Talk about awkward situations. Well now that ive got my lust out of the way I can really pay attention to the plot. This was a refreshing and very enjoyable chapter if I may say so myself. You kick ass..keep writing. I demand more, more! >_<

i can\'t think of a good comment besides saying wow it\'s great!!!!! whats gonna happen next?