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August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!! *BEGS AND PLEADS PATHETICALLY*
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July 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!! (SORRY to be a pain, but I love this story!!!!)
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June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@7. interesting story update soon
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad story you have here. My only complaint is that it need a bit more detail to it, and the formatting drives me nuts. (Since there's no tab stops in HTML, I come from the school that says you have to skip a line. I might be hopelessly out of date, because I see so many people not doing that now.) But I like the characters and the story has an unsettling yet sweetness to it you don't often find in erotic/pornographic stories.
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy Crap are you for real? or is that russian misspelling stuff (which is so charming, by the way) on purpose? Because the effect is good, ya! Your character\'s astonishment is bang on. unbelievable! Keep it up!
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
@4 This character is refreshing. So straightforward, it\'s really unbelievable. I\'m interested to see how she handles the party.
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please can u update soon is a good story i like it!! how many chapters have? can u tell? well i hope u can and i am waiting the next chapter bye bye
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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you\'ve gotta update, this story is so fucking hot
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait to see where this going. Please write more soon.
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This keeps getting hotter and hotter. I can\'t wait to see what happens next:)