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for Right Turn

by Memme

person Yue
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*pokes you with a cattle prod*

mooooooore =)
person Kikvws
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*smacks Jack around* Stop skirting the issue! That hot bishounen is going to get snatched away from you and then where will you be? Bishounen-less, that\'s where. Gah, I love this fic, please do write more. Interesting characters I\'m becoming addicted to, and while I love the realism of Jack being eased into gay land, I still want to shake him! Excellent!
person yue
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kyler\'s a sweetheart. I also love his name >_>.


Other than that, I have also have a bit of a bully complex....
person Eathgirl
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, oh, oh, OOOOH!! Honey... That last chapter was just brilliant... Beautifully written, I feel like I\'m right in the room with the characters and even inside of their minds somehow... Just exquisite, beautiful, perfect writing... ::sighs happily:: I am content... ^_________^
person D-Puppy
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So is Kyler gay in the story? And is this all real life stuff too? Damn I\'m conffuzzled!
person Earthgirl
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaw, man... If I were Ben, I\'d be swooning all over the place with that letter too... You just write so, so beautifully, honey and it always astounds me... :) And I\'m just loving the mystery... Ky is turning out to be a very luscious guy after all... ::sighs happily:: I can\'t wait to see what\'s next! ::bounces::
person Kikvws
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent, excellent job, once again! I\'m loving this fic to pieces...do continue, you\'re doing smashingly!
person Dana
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really great story. That last scene was so moving. I\'m really fond of your characters. especially Ben-I love how open minded he is about everything like accepting the fact that your best friend has come so close with someone who made your life hell,Though Kyler is trying too. Poor Claire...
I hope you update soon :)
person Venus
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAH!!!!!!! I can\'t wait for your next update! PLease PLease PLease update soon! I love this fic!
person Kikvws
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent, excellent fic! More please!