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Hey!! I\'m loving, loving, loving this fic!!! I can\'t wait to see what\'s going to happen next. As most of people here, I too think the mystery boy is Kyler...and I\'m hoping so. ;-) And I have to say I agree with the Anonnymous who said Kyler just got near Claire to be closer to Ben. :) I thought that, too. Not only that, but I also think Claire knows everything about Kyler liking Ben and/or the online chats, since they became good friends and all. Well, I guess I\'d better wait and see what comes next. I hope you can update asap!!! :-)
Oh, please, it has to be Kyler...LOL.

Haha, you know, Jack is cute and all, but I\'d think it\'d be totally awesome if Kyler ended up being gay (or even bi, doesn\'t matter xD;) and ends up with Ben ^__^ Especially with his reaction to Ben\'s comments in Chapter 8...

But Ben can really be a prick, though D:

Really loving this so far. I liked how Ben called Ky in Chapter 6 and he was imagining Ky all sweaty and whatnot xD Haha. Hopefully things get better between Ben/Claire/Ky :O Can\'t wait for more! <3

-isakuu

Could it be that Kyler-dearest may have developed some feelings for Ben-dear and used Claire as an excuse to know the other male...?

Or maybe I\'m just reading into it too much. xD

Ben can be rather mean....


lol


More please.

Oh! Oh! Almost there...damn! You fucking tease. Lol, no I thought the scene played out nicely. Jack keeps surprising me, and this time in a good way. His honesty was sweet and serves excellently as a means to frustrate ME for poor \'lil Ben. Looking forward to more!

*would just dare Penguin and NC17 to try it*

Beautiful story so far hun, and dun worry about the side show freaks, they just need to settle down some.

Keep writting babe

Heya! I got here from a friend. He told me that this was great so.. on with the review! Normally, I wait until I\'ve read everything thats been written, but I can\'t wait! Oh, my god! I\'m getting embarassed from just reading this. I have a permanant blush going on! Wow... I really think that Kyler is the one he\'s talking to online. He could be using the front of hitting on Claire, just to get closer to Ben. Because it only seems like he does it when Ben\'s around, and it\'s not like Claire\'s complaining. Jack has no idea what\'s going on. He wouldn\'t be *that* shy if he really was the one talking to Ben. Okay, I should just continue reading so maybe I\'ll get my answers. Toodlez! --Ashlee

Update... Now! I demand you update! And Ben is an idiot. I\'m still not positive that his mystery guy is Kyler, but I\'m pretty damn sure. He was out working in the yard, he has a step-mom, blah-blah. Yeah, he fell fo Kyler and that would make a damn hot sex-scene. Okay, you may now update. Toodlez! --Ashlee

Yeah i agree with you on that theory, but I didnt want to spoil it for those who didn\'t see the hints =P

AHHHHH! YOU BITCH! How could you do that to us?! I swear, if it wasn\'t a crime and you could finish this afterwards, I WOULD KILL YOU! Lol, yeah. I (Ashlee!) stick by my earlier words and say, \"That is SO Kyler!\" Ya know, why else would he give up AFTER BEn said what he thought he looked like. If it\'s NOT Kyler, I think I\'ll hurt you. Toodlez! --Ashlee

And now some words from Penguin...

It better be Kyler! Cause if it\'s not, I\'ll punch you in the face. Just kidding, Peace.

~Update... NOW!~