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for Right Turn

by Memme

person some chick
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what if i said i don\'t think ben should get with jack? i feel they\'re more like friends than boyfriends. is it just me or does ben and kyler have more going on??? seriously! they have so much more chemistry than ben and jack.

and is jack ever going to stop whining about being in the cloest? and when is ben stick it down to him, saying you either come out or i\'m not talking to you anymore????
person some chick
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh and i totally agree with Xtreme17nc13 about the chatting thing.
person some chick
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
if kyler really is pretending to be jack than this is my new favorite fic.
person D-Puppy
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT! That was nice. What\'s with Kyler? Is he like bi now? I\'m outta the loop...*cries* Oh well....*sniffle* Update soon. And remember when you planed on this being only a few chapters? *lol* Haha!
person Earthgurl
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::sobs:: Aw, man... Poor Ben... I really hope Claire and Ky forgive him... I hate to see him sad... Another glorious chapter... Full of feeling and again, it\'s just like I\'m there... Excellente, mi amiga... :)
person Xtreme17nc13
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Looks for Kyler in the mail* He\'s not here yet! Lol, great chapter, but you still have me on edge about the Mystery Guy. How many chapters do you think are left? Please say only a few! I can\'t stand the wait! Ugh! So, yeah. Please update very soon and I promise a lot of cookies. Toodlez! --Ashlee
person kay
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god u have to finish this story! its fantastic is something going to happen between ky and ben ??? i so want something to happen between them i mean the hand over the mouth thing my god my heart raced. PLEASE FINISH!!
person yue
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wait...

Is it Jack or is it Kyler playing along....



-Confused-


Mooooore ppleeaaaase
person kikvws
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww! Look at you being a posting fiend...I missed two chappies! Excellent chaps, I was so caught up in the ride home; the descriptive language was fabulous! Jack needs to pounce already. *cheers him on*. Can\'t wait for more!
person Moe
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHOO! You updated. :)