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for Right Turn

by Memme

person D-Puppy
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wait, they\'re seniors!? I didn\'t know....*goes into corner and sobs* Anyways, No! Ben should either get Jack or Kyler, not Mickey! Actually in my idea world, it would be Ben/Ky and Jack/Mickey with a fourgy thrown in (four ppl having sex). Also I like the whole Claire being shy, it\'s rather funny. I think I sorta relate to her and Ben. She seems a lot like a...um...how do I put this. Oh yeah now I remember the word I\'m called, exabishonist. And Ben is the pissed off residential gay dude. Well gotta go. Bye.
person yue
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
=O

Jack\'s rather insensitive......

and...

WHAT HAPPENS AFTERWARDS!? DO THEY GO TO COLLEGE TOGETHER AND GET A HOUSE WITH A PICKET FENCE AFTERWARDS!!??!!! OMG!

O.O OMG OMG OMG OMG (and so on) !!!
person turtledonkey27
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh, i feel the love! what a great ending :) now i feel all sappy. very nice, so glad ben finally figured it out. looks like ben wasn\'t the only dense one, since jack had no idea what the other two were really feeling the whole time. oh well, sucks to be him. kyler needs a lot of hugs to make up for lost time, don\'t you think?
person Xtreme17nc13
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update... now! Please? The dream was hot. Yeah, I liked that part. Especially when Jack morphed into Kyler, yep. The rest of the chapter was good too. Not enough Kyler-ness in my opinion, but hey, what can I do? This is your fic and it goes the way you want it to. *prays for Kyler to be Ben\'s stud-muffin* Toodlez! --Ashlee
person Earthgurl
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY COW!!!! Well, well, well, well, well! See now it\'s all comin\' to the surface! Man... This chapter was a little gut wrenching... But isn\'t it always hard to watch a jock dude fall like that? Wow... This was heavy hitting... So! What is this little secret pretty Ky is hiding, hmm? I can\'t wait to see where this goes! ::bounces::
person yue
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw, that was a good chapter, but from the author\'s note, I thought it was going to be the last chap. And yes, I\'ve been checking obsessively for updates b/c you said you\'ll try to finish it this weekend =)

<--- crazy
person Xtreme17nc13 & Penguin17
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Xtreme17nc13 -- SQUEEEEEEEE! I knew it, I knew it! Hah! Yes! I knew it! I kept telling Penguin that Jack liked Kyler, Kyler liked Ben, and Ben liked Jack, but he NEVER believed me! Yes! I was right all along. Can\'t wait for the smut. Toodlez! --Ashlee

Penguin17 -- That was really good. After the sex chapter, I don\'t know what I\'m going to do. Update soon. Peace
person some chick
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHH!!! OMG!!!! I WAS RIGHT I WAS RIGHT I WAS RIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *jumps up and down like a school girl* and the best part is... THERE\'S ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KYLER IS SEXY SEXY GAY BOY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person some chick
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU DID NOT JUST DO THAT!!!! BEN CAN NOT BE -THAT- DENSE!!!!! poor kyler! ben better get smart quick cos i don\'t want kyler to suffer!
person anon
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am totally confused about this ch at least sequentially. when does it happen how much time has passed since the last ch? What was going on in this ch. Was he at school? or at home? did it really happen? how did jack get so friendly with all of them?