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for Right Turn

by Memme

person D-Puppy
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Finale! You and me must talk. I love this story....
person some chick
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwe! hehehe you have to love ben&kyler smut!!! very adorable.
person Earthgurl
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want to cry... That was the most beautiful, most sensual most perfect love scene I\'ve ever read... Gods, so poetic and and so perfect... I have no clue how to rightly describe how gorgeous this was... Well worth the wait... ::pant:: Thank you very much... My day has been made! :hugs:
person anon
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the clarification. this was really good. poor ky must be frustrated as heck listening to ben go on about jack when he knows he\'s talking about himself
person Xtreme17nc13
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Sex! Lol, great writing on that. It felt very personal. Like I was there with them (I wish!). I\'m so sad that it\'s over. I\'m going to miss this. Penguin and I would talk this over like normal people would talk over a book. I\'m so happy that it\'s finished, but now I have nothing more to do. ::sigh:: Guess I\'m going to be bored until you write that sequel *hint hint nudge nudge* Lol, no. I\'ll do fine without a sequel. It\'s been a great ride. Toodlez! --Ashlee
person anon
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh. you finished it when i wasn\'t looking. I want to know when this happened i was on all weekend and i didn\'t see the updates. this is awesome!!!! yeah ! the end of oblivious was great it was classic. I would never have seen it coming. I am so glad that they ended up the way they did/ this was a great story and I look forward to see great things from you.
person keyonnamc
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was certainly and twist in the work of things. I would have never notice or suspected that Kyler was gay. I think Jack was a sort of asshole using Ben to get to Kyler. But Ben was a blind fool to begin with. I love the was things turned out. Amazing story. Who to read more from you.
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person Blou
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! Wonderful!! *Beams* I\'m all happy now!! Excellent ending and the epilogue was great ;)
person yue
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m glad I decided to check it once more before going to bed =)
person Kikvws
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, that was so good! Yet again, you evil woman, I really didn\'t see it coming. I assumed Ben\'s passing interest in our buff boy was just that; and with Jack\'s earlier mentioning about how nice it was to have someone to drool over men with...NOW it all clicks. Anyway, great job! I\'ll eagerly look for more from you!